Script writer

Hi!

Are you able to transform step by step tutorial scripts into more engaging scripts?

We have a Youtube channel that shows people how to build games without writing a single line of code.

The script is already written, but it's too step by step based (I will show what I mean below), I want you to make it more engaging so we will connect more with the people. It needs to be more talking to the people and involving them in the process.
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IN ORDER TO APPLY

- Our scripts will be around 15 minutes. Share your rate
- You can decide your own working hours
- Please share your experience
- Create a short sample:

Here is the full script to have a better understand what the video is about: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DHYsyelDAoA9g6MMdKAM0PN2uTqnGLX6pqRmH491EPs/edit?usp=sharing

For the sample you will only update the section "Enemy"

I want you to transform the script like I mentioned above.

Here a screen recording of the game (section enemy) to give more clarity: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1CJpRwKEBHFALSHdWFpsYE7bSYrYtXWNG/view?usp=sharing

P.s.

I will only respond to people that take this job post seriously and created a sample script.

Working with ChatGPT is not allowed because it's not working and it will false changes to the script.